Critique my Fiesta ST Blog Review Please

[Teezlr]

http://www.garagehollywood.com/2014/08/makes-2014-fiesta-st-good/

Hey guys, did a little writing this morning and wanted to get some feedback. I am by no means a writer but I have always enjoyed cars and after buying my first new car decided to do a short write up. Feel free to flame away and critique my stuff, hopefully do a proper write up and photo shoot/video in the next few weeks waiting on my camera and gear.

 

[Phreak]

Pretty good, I think you caught the main thing that I have been noticing which is NOBODY except car enthusiasts even knows this thing exists. So when you tell them you bought a Fiesta... they shrug it off like "Oh, you bought a economy box with a wing on it".

Points you missed though, under gearbox it is worth noting that the 6 speed is the only available transmission. No automatic slushbox nonesense!

Otherwise pretty good read!

 

[originalrocket]

I love my economy box with a wing on it. Especially when all they see is my tail lights, wondering what the heck just owned them.

 

[Teezlr]

Pretty good, I think you caught the main thing that I have been noticing which is NOBODY except car enthusiasts even knows this thing exists. So when you tell them you bought a Fiesta... they shrug it off like "Oh, you bought a economy box with a wing on it".

Points you missed though, under gearbox it is worth noting that the 6 speed is the only available transmission. No automatic slushbox nonesense!

Otherwise pretty good read!

Yes!

Ok, adjustments made!

 

[Phreak]

Yes!

Ok, adjustments made!

I like it!